AgentParanoia
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Apr 27 '08
I want to see the sea,
To be upon the hot sands
And gaze out from the land
At blue-green eternity.
I want to see the sea
And hear its many sounds:
Waves, gulls, wind…all around
Is oh so much beauty.
I want to see the sea,
But before I go,
There’s one thing I want to know:
Would you come with me?
Just a little something I wrote. Something seems wrong with the last stanza, though, but I can't put my finger on it. Also, I haven't actually been to the beach in about three years, so if I got anything wrong, please tell me.